Today Grace at d’verse Poet Pub has prompted us to write an Ottavo Rima Poem

My Spinney
In those days we were coppers and robbers,
cowboys and Indians in makeshift teepees,
feral, ferocious gangsters and mobsters,
stalking, spying, vying for victory.
Alien monsters, war-torn soldiers,
lethal enemies in every bush and tree.
Catapult braces, bicycle racing
home with hunger and dirty faces.

I often reminisce such childish bliss,
the ghosts of which I never left behind.
Sacred secrets sworn in boyhood trysts,
historic bytes, like priceless jewels come to mind.
A chance to revisit was not to be missed,
so I journeyed way back to My Spinney to find
in its place an estate of new houses stood.
Bricks and mortar had devoured the wood.

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18 responses to “My Spinney”

  1. Those childhood escapades were so fun and precious. This line struck a chord: Memories like lost jewels come to mind. It is funny to revisit these places again in our older years – it looks so different now. Feeling nostaglic to see the place full of houses now. Thanks for joining in! 

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  2. Children have the greatest imaginations and if they are lucky they carry that inspiration and magic with them throughout life. I think you are a lucky one.

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  3. this took me back to the pine forest I played in as a child. thank you for awakening the memories

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  4. Indeed… I do remember those patches of wood now mostly gone… what do children do these days?

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    1. They sit at home, Bjorn, looking at memes!

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  5. Delightful nostalgia in your poem, Shirley, which took me back to childhood, and I congratulate your mastery of the form. I love the impish humour in the lines:

    ‘Whipped our foes (not hard) with stolen shoe laces
    and went home with hunger and dirty faces’

    and the bump down to earth in:

    ‘I revisited my spinney to find
    in its place a row of houses stood.
    The bricks and mortar had devoured the wood’.

    Sadly, this is all too familiar.

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    1. Thank you, Kim 🙂

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      1. You’re most welcome, Shirley!

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  6. The nostslgia, the longing. So beautifully crafted in your poem.

    Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    Much♡love

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  7. Thank you, Gillena.

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  8. I am definitely a member of the “creaky” generation … love where you took me with your poem.

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  9. You took me back to childhood, Shirley! Revisiting is never fun. I loved the nostalgia and longing in your poem.

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  10. Lovely way to express the preciousness of early childhood memories. ❤️

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  11. Thank you for commenting 🙂

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